How To Ask for 5 Million Dollars by Nathaniel Adam Briggs
Here’s a sample pitch for Venture/Angel Capital from eGenerations.com. He lost me around the 4:30 to 5:00 minute mark, and you’ll see that he uses “all that sort of thing” too often. This is a good pitch to look at for some good points, and some “don’t do that” items. Within the latter, you probably shouldn’t compare your product to the cure for cancer like he does, unless it IS the cure for cancer.